Mark Knecht wrote:
> Groovy stuff Dave-o!
>
> On Sun, Jun 7, 2009 at 8:28 AM, Dave Phillips<dlphillips@email-addr-hidden> wrote:
>
>> Greetings,
>>
>> Continuing my descent into 2009:
>>
>> http://linux-sound.org/audio/studiodave-blues_under_pressure.ogg
>>
>> http://linux-sound.org/audio/studiodave-blues_under_pressure.mp3
>>
>> Best,
>>
>>
>
Good song!
What is the chord scheme?
One comment about the lyrics.... The sentence which tell about your
woman and your best friend...
I dunno, it's maybe a bit to direct and to cliche too..?
Maybe you could build up the tension it bit more through the song?
Maybe you can state it, so people don't hear you say it directly, but
knowing what is happening here clearly...
Just an tip, I'm not an experienced lyric writer at all...
\r
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