Re: [LAU] A new song..

From: James Stone <jamesmstone@email-addr-hidden>
Date: Fri Jun 12 2009 - 00:50:16 EEST

Dave Phillips wrote:
> Hi James,
>
> I'm no critic of the style, but I enjoyed the song. Some
> comments/suggestions:
>
> The voice placement and presence are fine. New recordists tend to
> undermix their vocals when they should be more up-front, but I like
> where the voice is in this mix.
>
> The drums are under-recorded. The part is fine, but it should either
> have a different sound (i.e. a different kit) or more presence in the
> mix. Or both.
>
> Bass could use a wee bit more presence.
>
> I like the lyrics. :)
>

Great! I spent all of 5 minutes coming up with them!! :) They are
supposed to be quite inane... but I like that! :)

> A little dirtier sound might be appropriate for the style, but I'm not
> sure how you'd achieve that effect.
>
> HTH,
>

Just uploaded a new version called "Red" (mixed based on your
suggestions and mastered with jamin).. Maybe overdid the volume tho..

http://drop.io/your_clothes_are_red

James
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