Hey Diego!
Nice tune! I like how the mix starts, but later on it feels like it's
either clipping or overcompressed. I would also really mind hihat and
percussion levels, a lot of them might sound better if they are quieter, so
that the beat feels more together. As a rule, I make hihats really-really
quiet, this is one of the major tips of writing techno. Usually you reduce
the loudness of the hiahat to 0 and then increase its loudness until you
can make it out, but not louder than that.
I would also reduce the lows on most of the elements, by about 1.38 when
the claps starts it becomes really crowded. I like the string at 6.20, very
clean, but the mix itself is not breathing at this point and feels a bit
flat, whereas I want to feel the dynamics and the groove. And what's
interesting, the mix itself sound relatively clean, so a bit more dynamics
could really make it awesome.
Cheers!
Louigi Verona
https://louigiverona.com/
On Fri, May 1, 2020 at 11:26 PM Diego Simak <diego.simak@email-addr-hidden> wrote:
>
>
> El vie., 1 may. 2020 a las 14:02, Jeanette C. (<julien@email-addr-hidden>)
> escribió:
>
>> May 1 2020, Diego Simak has written:
>> ...
>> > https://soundcloud.com/diegosimak/tm-2020-05-01t125331
>> This sounds very electro nightclubby. I could imagine the kicks pumping
>> out a big PA. It also shows a non too often exposed side of Yoshimi. I
>> think I'd love to hear that in a Berlin underground club. :)
>>
>> Best wishes,
>>
>> Jeanette
>>
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>> (Britney Spears)
>>
>
>
> Hey Jeanette!
>
> Thank you very much for listening.
>
> Yeah, I would love to ear it in a underground club too.
>
> Best wishes,
> Diego
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